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Sunday, September 15, 2013

Jaden Larson: Origins of the Portal



What's this?

It was a pleasant afternoon, the birds flying around were chirping, in a melodious, yet somewhat warning way. There did seem to be something fishy in the midst, something very large. At least, Jaden Larson felt it. He felt that what had happened only a few a days ago was not the end of a mysterious saga, something literally out of this world. It was only a few days ago, six days to be exact, that Jaden's sister Lucy and his friend Lily had claimed to close an inter-planet portal between the Earth and Neptune. How the portal had been opened and how it is even possible for it to exist was unknown. What made Jaden feel suspicious was a blue gas being emitted by the house in which the portal was. What bewildered him was the fact that only he could see it. His sister couldn't see it, Lily couldn't see it, and his friend James couldn't see it. "Maybe you're different. Maybe this is a sign of something. Last week, you heard a voice that led you into the house, house number ninety-three, as I recall" said James, when Jaden asked if he could see it. "Only you could hear it Jaden, none of us could. Honestly, I thought I had lost my little bother when you fell into that pit" said Lucy, in a voice which showed her fear. All those remarks didn't help Jaden feel better, not one bit. The fact that he was the youngest out of all four of them made him feel even more anxious. " Well, I'll be back. I'm going to see if anything is happening over there" said Jaden, still trying to figure out why only he could see the gas. "I'm coming with you, it's too dangerous to go alone, and with you, it's even more dangerous" said James, and they both left the Larson's home. When they got there, they both saw completely different things. Jaden saw rubble, furniture from inside the house lying in the front porch, the skeleton structures which used to frighten him and he saw that the house was slowly decomposing itself. James, on the other hand saw rubble, and nothing else. "The house is destroying itself. This thing is alive, and something is going to happen sooner or later" mumbled Jaden, quivering. "I see dust. The house is in good condition. I can only see Rick's computer" replied James, with a puzzled look on his face. Rick Taylor was a man who was inside the house, who posted information about it on the internet. He lived next to Lily and James Thompson's house. "Have you heard from Rick lately? I mean, you are neighbors" asked Jaden. "Now that you mention it, I haven't" replied James, quite confused. "What's this?" said Jaden, looking down at his feet. He thought he was seeing things, but a book just appeared out of nowhere. He picked it up. "Look, James". "What?" said James, staring at Jaden. "Oh, come on! You can't see this too?" replied Jaden, fuming. "Let's go back, I want to examine this".

Lily shocks everyone

As Jaden and James walked home, Jaden felt a sudden stretch in his arm muscle, the arm in which he was holding the book. He felt a burning sensation, one which was so great, Jaden felt the muscles and bones inside him melt and reform again. James couldn't quite figure out what was happening, and neither could Jaden. Jaden instantly felt okay, but his urge for the book increased dramatically. If it was not for Jaden's home, they would probably be in terrible danger. As expected by Jaden, Lucy couldn't see the book. However, Lily, who wore glasses, could. "What is that book doing in your hands? It looks beat-up and worn down" asked Lily, while everyone stared at her in disbelief. "You can see it too?!" asked Jaden, looking more excited than ever, at least, for the past couple of hours. Lily took her glasses off to confirm it. "Now I can't" she said. "Wait, give me that" demanded Lucy, as she put on the glasses. "I can see it too!" said Lucy, quite amazed. She instantly went down and asked her mother for her glasses, and she put them on. "Open it up" she told Jaden, who was still stuck on trying to solve the mystery of the glasses. He opened it, only to cough up dust, loads and loads of dust. "WOW" said everyone in harmony, except James, who looked more puzzled than a mouse using the internet. "What is it?" he asked. Jaden could see, in faint, dampened letters, 'Diary of Reakton Carstonomin'. "It's a diary. A diary written by Reakton Carstonomin" said Jaden. "Who?"

Who is Reakton Carstonomin?  

"Wait, Jaden, before you open the book, are you sure you will be fine after reading it?" asked James, although he was unaware of what was even happening. "Whatever happens, well, it happens" replied Jaden, confident, yet, nervous in different ways. He turned the page. 96th Glachsteam, 7813 read the date. "Wherever this came from, the dates and years are very different" said Jaden. "Even with the glasses, we can't see it. Read on" said Lily. "Today is the last day of the first out of two months. Today, I begin to write this diary based upon our homeland Neptune's invasion of that small, meaningless planet, Earth" read Jaden, slowly because his reading skills were not great. "Am I the only one who thinks it's weird that Neptunians speak English?" asked Lucy. "Neptunians?" asked Jaden, without even bothering about the question asked by his sister. "Well, they need to have  a name" replied Lucy. "Keep reading" ordered Lily, who seemed more interested than everyone else. "Our ship is almost finished today. It's like a portal, which will open inside a big house. This will send a message to the inhabitants of that wasteland that we are coming with a brute force. According to the schedule, I will leave our great planet, along with one of our young ones tomorrow. In the calender of Earth, it will be on the 13th of August, 2002. They have a strange calender, which has 12 whole months! Crazy people, those Earthlings" continued Jaden. "Wait, Jaden, isn't that the exact same day as you were born?" asked James, still quite confused. "Well, what a coincidence!" said Jaden. "Moving on, I'll read the next entry. 1st Closdonian, 7813: today is the second and final month of the year, having ninety-seven days. After this month, another 193 day year ends. Today was the scheduled launch of the inter-planet portal between here and Earth. It was a disaster! Before I got on, the baby which I was supposed to take with me did. The mission control thought I was on the ship, and they launched it. This would not have proven to be such a problem, until the child inside pressed the 'extreme speed' button by accident. There was no way of getting him or the ship back. We must hope that the creatures of Earth do not torture the poor thing. Another spaceship will be ready in about a decade, in Earth years. Today, I stop writing in this diary, only to resume after the new ship is built". There was a moment of silence. "There is a Neptunian on our planet right now?" said Lily, quite in shock. 

11 Years later

"Jaden, continue reading. We need to know what happens next" said Lucy. Jaden continued. "34th Glachsteam, 8001: Today, I departed Neptune, I alone. We decided not to take a risk this time. Today, 30th March, 2013, in Earth years, I opened the portal at house number 93, on a place called 'Park's Avenue'. The naming system here is bizarre. More people from Neptune will be here in twelve days. My job is to scout and send information back". "Twelve days from the 30th of March means on Friday, 3 days from now. We may be in serious trouble" said James. "There's one more line" said Jaden. "My name on Earth, in case anyone asks will be Rick Taylor". "Rick?" said Lucy. "The same Rick Taylor who helped us out of that house, who posted the information online". "We have only three days" said Lily. Surprisingly, nobody noticed that Jaden and Lucy's father, Frederick Larson, was reading along with them. "Jaden" he said, startling everyone. "It's about time I told you something: your mother and I aren't your real parents. We found you outside house number ninety-three and took you in. You are the child from Neptune". Nobody even had time to think about it. There was a very loud sound from outside. BOOM!!!! Everyone rushed outside, only to see fire around house number ninety-three. There was a fallen bag of groceries, and lying beside it, was Jaden and Lucy's dead mother.


Stay tuned for the next part.    
 
   

Thursday, September 12, 2013

Jaden Larson: The House of Mystery


 

 

The Research

“No, Jaden, don’t go in there!”. “AHHHHH!!!”......

Wait, wait a second, this is not where our story

begins. Let’s go back about three hours.

Sheesh, you just can’t find a good storyteller

these days!

THREE HOURS EARLIER

“ Lucy, are you done with your ‘project’ yet, I want

to go outside” moaned Jaden. “ Can’t you just

wait, I only started ten minutes ago. And you

said you’d help” said Lucy, too focused on her

computer to even look at Jaden.“I know I did, but it seems so boring. And you

don’t have to be mean!” replied Jaden. “Sorry,

but you know the abandoned house down the

street?” asked Lucy. “Yeah, if you mean the tall,

dark and scary looking one”. “Of course I mean

that. Anyway, I heard noises from inside it the

other night and wanted to do some research.

Now are you interested?” said Lucy. Jaden’s

face said it all. “How much have you got so far?”

he asked curiously. “ Well, not that far at all,

actually. But I’m sure we can do it as a team!”.

Secrets Unveiled

‘DING DONG’

“I’ll get it” yelled Lucy as she ran

“ Who is it?” screamed Jaden.

“It’s just Lily and James”

Lucy screamed back.

“Could

you guys keep it down

please?!” yelled Lucy’s

mother.

Lily and James were their

friends and they were also

siblings, just like Lucy and

Jaden. And James was elder

to Lily just like Lucy was

elder to Jaden. The four

of them were the best of

friends and you just couldn’t

separate them. Lucy and Jaden gave a quick

recap and they were back

to the research again. They

found a link that gave it all

away. 'Dark corridors, small

candles for light, skeletons at

every corner and much more.

Nobody that has entered has

ever come out alive. Every

skeleton died in that house

and their ghosts now roam it
at night’.

said Lily.


“This was written by Rick Taylor”

“But how would he know this? In

his own words ‘nobody that

has entered has ever come

out alive’ “ said Jaden.


Come in, little boy.....

Two And A Half Hours Later...

“I’m glad that’s over” said Lily. They had been

researching for two hours straight. “I think I

would’ve gone mad if we were doing that any

longer. It was so scary!” said Lucy. They were

all outside now, going the opposite direction

of the house. But then Jaden heard a woman

speaking to him. “Come in my dear boy, come in.

It'll be fun” the voice said. Jaden turned back

and walked towards the house. He didn’t hear

anything until he just got to the door; “don’t go

in there!!” screamed Lucy. But it was too late.

The House

Jaden fell with a thud. “Are you okay?” screamed Lucy

to her younger brother. “I’m just fine. There is a

mattress down here” he yelled back. “You stay here,

we’ll go look for a rod to pull you up” said James.

But as they were about to leave, a very strong

wind pulled them in too! “Is everyone okay?” asked

Jaden, more quietly now.

“Wait, before we start roaming around, Jaden, why

did you come in here?!” asked Lily, rather angrily. “I

just heard a voice, asking me to come in and then I

didn’t know what I was doing until I got to the door.

But it was too late then. I have no explanation for what sucked you into this, well, I don't know what to call it". Both Lily and James were

wearing glow-in-the-dark

t-shirts, so they could

see quite easily, if they

stuck together.

The house was just as Taylor

said it was. You could

actually see skeletons
over ten feet. It smelt

like someone was farting

It was a horrific sight! As they

started moving slowly,

James up front, followed

by Lucy, Jaden and then

Lily, Lily felt something

cover her mouth and grab

her. The same happened

to Lucy and Jaden.

James didn’t notice

anything. It was only

when he turned around

that he noticed, they were nowhere to be seen.

Where are they?

James did not panic. He just thought they had

wandered off into another room. But they

weren't in any of the rooms they had passed.

Now James panicked. Little did he know that

the ghosts had taken them into the closets of

the rooms. But Jaden managed to free himself

from the ghost and he ran, straight into James.

He thought the ghost was following him, but

when he turned back, it was empty. He turned

around, only to see James hanging in mid-air.

“Help!” he screamed. He was indeed being held

up by the ghost. And then the same happened

to Jaden......

A whole new world

The boys thought the girls would come to their

rescue. But Lily’s and Lucy’s closet led straight

into another planet, Neptune. Here, all the

ghosts of the people that died that night

roamed free on this massive blue ball.

But the climate here seemed to be the same as

Earth’s. All they knew was that they had to get

back. They turned back and the portal was still

open. But wait, it was closing. They made a run

for it and got through just before it closed.

“That was close” said Lucy. But then they heard screams coming from outside the room......

An epic encounter

Lily and Lucy ran outside the room. As soon as the

ghosts saw them, they put Jaden and James

down. The four of them gathered all their

bravery, and decided the only way they were going

to get out of there was by fighting. And if

they didn’t fight, they'd be ghost prisoners on

Neptune. The situation was very simple; life, or, well, some would say, death. There was a silent stare down for a

while but then one of the ghosts pulled his head

off and gave the others the fright of their

lives! But they weren’t going to back down. They

weren’t going to quit. But three seconds later, they realized the ghosts had disappeared. The girls told Jaden and James

where they were. Just as

they thought the ghosts had

disappeared back to Neptune,

they came up behind them and

nearly made them faint! But they

all turned around and kicked the

ghosts, which for some reason

actually hit them and made

run away, crying. “Wimps” said

Jaden as he watched them go

back to Neptune. The kids kept

walking. There were scary-looking

skeletons, frightening pictures

in frames, and weird noises

everywhere, but none of these

came as a shock to the children

now. In fact, It seemed like

nothing would come as a shock

to them. But something did. It

wasn't a vampire or Frankenstein. It

was in fact a human being! He was

staring out of his window. “Are

you by any chance, Rick Taylor?”

said James. He got a fright, but

he turned around and said very

weakly, “Yes I am”.

All the pieces fall into place.....

There was a lot of blood in the

room. And there was nothing

but a table, a bed, a chair

and a computer inside. “You

must’ve read me article

on thes house tha’ I pu’

online two days ago”. It

was quite obvious Rick was

Scottish, you could tell

from his accent. “Ye’ see”

he continued. “Neptune

and Earth ‘ave a special

connection, which aliens

created farty’ million years

ago. Three days ago, tha’

portal was supposed to open.

There was a party goin’ on

in this house, and of all the

places it hadda’ pick to open,

the portal opened here.

“This opening, wasn’t just any opening. It exploded, creating

a hole in the wall. It also killed every living theng in

this house. All their spirits wenta’ Neptune, where they

started a new life. An’ they could cum’ in and go out of

this house whenever they wanted”. “Wait, how are you

still alive?” asked Lily. “I was outside when it happened.

There was a flash a’ blue light and a loud sound that came

from inside. I came in to check it out. But the house ate

me and now I’m, I mean we’re trapped in ‘ere. The only way

to close the portal and free us is by a live human being

goin’ through it. Tha’ way, only spirits could go to Neptune,

but never come back”. “We closed the portal!” said Lucy

and Lily excitedly. “Wha’?” said Rick. “We went through

it and got back just before the portal closed!”. “We’re

free!” everyone shouted as they ran out of the house.

    

 

And so, their lives continued as it did, or did they? 

The sequel will be out soon.